The international community must act immediately to ensure all nations reduce the consumption of fossil fuel (gas and oil). To what extent do you agree or disagree?
With the upsurge of world population, the demand for fossil fuel has increased exponentially causing detrimental effects to the environment. Thus, I agree with the notion that swift action must be taken by the related authorities to lessen the exploitation of fossil fuel.
To embark with, the adverse effect of fossil fuel consumption to the environment is undeniable. In recent months, we have been flooded with news reporting about climate change and global warming happening around the world. Emission of greenhouse gas such as carbon dioxide and harmful gas from industrial activities and automobiles has polluted the air severely. For example, the recent bush fire in Australia has destroyed half of the forest killing a significant number of animals with their habitats.
As fossil fuel is a non-renewable energy, continuous supply will exhaust the resource. Despite many research and innovations has been done to utilise renewable energy such as wind and solar, the consumption is still not viable in many countries especially in developing countries. Renewable energy sources are costly and it is still in the development level. I believe that our dependence on fossil fuel will reduce with the developments in technology. Meanwhile, strict rules should be imposed in industrial areas on maximum limit of carbon emission. Awareness campaign should be conducted for the public regarding the negative effect of fossil fuel overuse.
To recapitulate, it is an alarming truth that the consumption of fossil fuel is going beyond the reasonable limit and effective actions must be applied soon by the decision makers to reduce the damaging effect we might face soon if the demand is not controlled.
- The international community must act immediately to ensure all nations reduce the consumption of fossil fuel gas and oil To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- The international community must act immediately to ensure all nations reduce the consumption of fossil fuel gas and oil To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
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Suggestion:
... number of animals with their habitats. As fossil fuel is a non-renewable energy...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, still, thus, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36802973978 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90374790754 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594795539033 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2929913937 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.076923077 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163265663001 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604309729756 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498279785808 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103205608513 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203951300457 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.26 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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