The new era of globalization has introduced innovative methods that have been adopted and developed by nations to unprecedented standards. These have altered our perception towards a variety of concepts and ideas, such as international marketing, and while the latter has brought different cultures together, it has also brought about a lot of controversy.
On one hand, there are those who believe that international marketing has a negative impact on their country. There is no doubt that there is a solid reasoning that supports this notion. More specifically, in the wake of the destructive events of World War II, the United States emerged as the undisputed sovereign nation to rule all others. Having already achieved major breakthroughs in areas such as science and technology, they have managed to influence the rest of the world, often with use of violence, to such an extent that nowadays everyone else the world over wishes to experience the legendary American Dream and leave behind their own customs and practices. Thus, it only makes sense to look upon international marketing as a means of a superpower to corrupt and undermine their traditional way of life.
On the other hand, there are those who do not regard international marketing as an arrogant and disparaging way to treat their morals and traditions. They only wish for those who live in this time and age to make progress in terms of education, ideology and overall advancement. By doing so, their country's youth do not remain stagnant and potentially fail, but they rather maintain a competitive edge in an ever-changing environment.
In my opinion, international marketing may be seen as an opportunity for young people mainly to expand their horizons, but first they have to learn to appreciate their own cultural heritage and then those of more technologically advanced countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, so, then, thus, while, no doubt, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21594684385 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05016681859 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614617940199 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.2726044225 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.727272727 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3636363636 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.72727272727 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0967503334065 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0371118384231 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353443614902 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0575322128962 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221402100607 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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