An educational system is usually focused on a variety of disciplines that aim to prepare students for the challenges of real life. In my opinion, physical education should be integrated into curriculums so that both male and female children can take part in a fitness program, once or twice per week.
To begin with, physical education promotes companionship and fellowship. Individuals of different qualities learn to work together and share responsibilities under the surveillance of an experienced fitness instructor. For example, a student may be robust and physically strong, but not that intelligent, while someone else may be fond of arts and music, but of fragile, sensitive nature. Being part of the same team, not only do they work towards a common goal, but also learn how to cooperate and support each other. At the same time an effort can be made to overcome their natural deficiencies. The former will not necessarily become a “thick” bully that intimidates others, whereas the other one may very well grow up to a confident and sturdy man.
Moreover, taking part in an exercise program does not have to be a privilege of male students only. Young girls need to build a firm body as well, since many of them will give birth at some point in their lives. Therefore, all of them can take advantage of a well-organized workout plan that boosts their immune system and improves their overall health.
All in all, children of all ages and gender should engage in physical activities while at school. They should not look at it as a boring and tedious task but as an opportunity to better themselves as a whole, and they will be rewarded for their effort in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for example, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94076655052 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89070959614 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609756097561 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3317553867 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.076923077 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218507345443 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720643267237 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678044430549 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135820593946 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602304899575 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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