international sporting events such as the olympic games and the football world cup provide an outlet for patriotic feeling, and help reduce international tensions
one of the international activity that is connecing al of the countries in the world is international tournament such as olympic games and the footbal world cup, which is usefull for reducing international conflict, and as well as creating the feelings of patriotism to their country. this writing totally agree with that statement, since the international turnament can add strong relation with another countries, also being representative of our nation in the international turnament is increasing our patriotic felling.
international tension is important thing to manage for all of the countries which can avoid war. one of the best way to reduce the international tension is creating activity which can be followed by all of the country such as olympic games and football world cup. this is because those actitivies can give space for all of the nations to manage a good comunication by being participant in international tournament which can get rid of international tension, and it will show a peace in international to all of the countries. For example, the tension of North and South Korea disapear directly in the olympic games and it is followed by making peace agreement for both
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, well, for example, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1003.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 194.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17010309278 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15839763305 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 176.041082164 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 312.3 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.482713836 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.166666667 106.682146367 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.3333333333 20.7667163134 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393879854196 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.220808495004 0.084324248473 262% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116839258587 0.0667982634062 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.330377024461 0.151304729494 218% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169568945514 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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