International tourism has bought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and environment. Do disadvantage outweigh the advantages?
There is no doubt that the influx of international tourists has significantly impacted numerous countries in positive ways. Nevertheless, these advantages are accompanied by several drawbacks. From my perspective, the benefits of international tourism outweigh its drawbacks for the affected economy and culture nation overall. This essay will analyze both the advantages and disadvantages, supporting my viewpoint accordingly.
Regarding the benefits, perhaps, the travel industry would be beneficial to boost economic prosperity. The stimulus could be executed by flourishing accommodations and cottage industry businesses. If the two sectors increased, it would create a broadened job opportunity for local societies. This condition may lead to overall prosperity, not only for earning money for individuals but also for upsurging local revenue. For example, Bali can uplift its socio-economy through hotel amenities and Balinese fabric to support tourism, which brings along as one of the high regional income contributors for its country. Furthermore, promoting culture will hopefully be shoved. It can appear as a cultural festival or traditional ceremony that could be introduced to foreign tourists. therefore, they would bring this experience to their communities and make this a recommended place to visit.
Conversely, we should not ignore the various drawbacks that this foreign tourism industry may bring about. Firstly, the problem is that increasing crime rates immoral activities. A foreign tourist is likely to bring their bad habit of visiting clubs in the evening. As a consequence, it will lead to a higher rate of alcohol-related such as drugs and prostitution which may have a negative impact on morals in local societies. In addition, this tourism may affect water absorption resources. This is because the construction of international accomodation occasionally built in hills or highlands area. Thus, This area will be vulnerable to disasters caused by reduced water infiltration areas such as floods and landslides.
Henceforth, it can be confidently conveyed that, even though the growth in the travel industry has accompanying negative social and environmental impacts, these do not outweigh the contributions made by this sector toward economic well-being and cultural promotion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 780, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, conversely, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, may, nevertheless, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in addition, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1979.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.80351906158 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25268196616 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624633431085 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.9181201669 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.95 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.05 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125958546482 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0355211091682 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385263382454 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0817989707841 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497747072089 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.06 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.5 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 78.4519038076 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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