Many countries in the world consider tourism as the main income for their economy. Although the benefit these countries gain from tourism, it affects local communities negatively in several aspects.
The main advantage of international tourism is undoubtedly money. Tourists from around the world came to visit touristic places and spend a lot of cash on food, entertainment, hotels, pleasure, and to bring souvenirs with them when they return home. Moreover, they usually come with foreign currencies such as the Euro and US Dollar, which give rise to the market of currency exchange. They also bring their culture, language, and ideas with them, and this can help local inhabitants to develop many aspects based on those ideas, Also it allows them to learn foreign languages and to know about other's culture.
On the other hand, international tourism brings many disadvantages and negative impacts on the local communities. First of all, tourists from different places have different cultures and different beliefs, and this can affect the local culture in a negative way, especially conservative cultures, for example, Islamic countries forbid alcohol and tourists usually do not respect that. Second, touristic places in order to develop must build a lot of touristic cities, which affects the environment negatively. Finally, many touristic countries affected by foreign cultures, which erase and destroy their own identity.
In conclusion, despite all the advantages international tourism has brought to touristic places, it also has brought many negative effects, as a price these countries must pay to get this benefit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...tries must pay to get this benefit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, moreover, second, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52777777778 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.771975232 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579365079365 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.5367179064 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.636363636 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5454545455 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215389638553 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102575382014 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0964555703654 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150913213538 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501944187446 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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