Travelling has been increasing drastically from the past decades. Undoubtedly, the tourism industry has brought enormous benefits not only economically but culturally as well, however, the downside cannot be overlooked.
To begin with, travelling from one country to another generates employment as many people are required to make arrangements for tourists. For instance, to provide accomodation to foreigners, hotels need to employ staff which can take care of the guests which includes, cook, waiter, cleaner, gardener and driver. Generally, in developing countries, not everyone is educated enough to find a suitable job in big companies and hence, they can be hired by the hospitality industry to maintain the well-being of the place. This results in an increase in employment rate. In addition, cultural exchange is one of the advantages of tourism as it enhances the knowledge base. People get an opportunity to learn about other religions, time-zones, eating habits, traditions and festivals. Although these things can be acquired through the internet or books, the live experience is much more worthwhile.
On the contrary, there are few drawbacks which need to be considered. Firstly, it can be a threat to our own culture due to lack of awareness about others culture. For instance, in Arab countries, Females are allowed to wear burkha instead of short-dresses, however, foreigners might not understand the mythological beliefs behind this phenomenon and tend to disrespect the people of that country,although unintentionally. Secondly, tourism contributes in pollution. This is because a larger amount of passengers are travelling across the globe and the aviation industry provides cheaper flights which results in emission of huge carbon dioxide. Moreover, it affects the air quality index which makes air hazardous to inhale. For example, in the past few decades the AQI has been raised from moderate i.e 72 to poor i.e 122 which is not good for human beings.
To conclude, there is no doubt that travelling is beneficial in true sense as it raises job opportunities and promotes cultural transfer, however, it can be disrespectful sometimes and is contributing to air pollution.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 397, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , although
...to disrespect the people of that country,although unintentionally. Secondly, tourism cont...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, no doubt, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1867.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45906432749 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11235437718 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608187134503 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.5931465742 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.823529412 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1176470588 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.88235294118 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.094601238647 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0323220585002 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399875074436 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0590441701504 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390528123061 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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