It is often argued that whether majority of people are becoming dependent or self-reliant. This essay will discuss how people are reliant on domestic help and how they have become financially stable. I strongly believe that earning potential makes people more independent.
The predominant reason why people are called as dependent is that, in the fast paced world, everyone is in rush and hardly get time to indulge in domestic chores. They prefer to hire an external source in order to maintain the basic life. For instance, hiring a full-time maid for cleaning, cooking or baby- sitting will eventually save their time, however, makes them dependent on someone else. Moreover, basic household work takes up alot of time which is not ideal for working people. Hence, they are considered as depending on other people.
On the other hand, people argue that a good percentage of people have become financially self-dependent which gives them the confidence to take the reins of life in the their own hands. Earning potential not only makes people to do things on their own, but support their families as well. For example, the ratio of dependency decreases after graduation as they start their employment. Not only men, but women are also becoming more self-supporting than ever before. Hence, it is significantly clear that being financially strong helps to promote individualism.
To summarise, although people have become more independent by earning money as they can their decisions whether small or big, they often rely on the other people in order to get the donestic chores done. I would like to reiterate that people should try to do their works and become fully self-sufficient.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: the; their
...confidence to take the reins of life in the their own hands. Earning potential not only m...
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Suggestion:
...independent by earning money as they can their decisions whether small or big, th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14492753623 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74466506252 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5435724353 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257000310473 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891318094039 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724198452326 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172381667145 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558361195049 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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