Internet access helps young people and workers achieve their education and work goals more easily than before. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
First of all, the youth success in their education simpler than before. Since the internet has developed considerably year by year, a lot of schools nowadays use website to recruit students from around the work. Therefore, young people not only can easily find loads of scholarships on the internet, but also, they can search for the information about the school they would to like study extremely simple. After considering carefully, they will choose a subject, which they love to learn and the possibility to be successful in the future is remarkable since they have a chance to approach the thing they like soon. Meanwhile, in the past, it is complicated for people to reach the information about schools around the world, newspaper is the only way to reach that.
Second of all, as same as young people, labors also success in their work easier than in the past. Most of company nowadays recruit employees through the internet so that every people can approach the information not as difficult as before. Moreover, the description about the job will be appeared fully on the website, which employees can access and look for the position that suit them. Therefore, this probably may give the labors more chances to be successful in their career. However, in the past, people can work in a good place with high salary per month if they have a relationship in a particular field.
In conclusion, I agree that internet brings accomplishment closer to every human being and some people get rich by this special technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1269.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93774319066 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6539132926 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571984435798 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8957071289 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.363636364 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.90909090909 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164253129223 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672675718865 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040292444149 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11175790028 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227781965404 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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