Internet is becoming a dominant element in modern life. What are the ad vantages and disadvantages of the Internet?
Internet is undoubtedly a crucial part of the modern society due to its benefits to people of different ages and occupations. Apart from its advantages, there are some related problems that could be harmful to users. This essay will examine the pros and cons of the Internet to today’s life.
On the one hand, the Internet could provide the fastest and the quickest access to various sources of information without wasting time scrolling through heavy books. There are numerous websites with reliable sources of information related to international news, mathematic exercises and history. By using some websites that support students who are having difficulty in Math, many high-schoolers could make progress without overspending on extra classes after school. Moreover, the Internet works as a versatile form of entertainment because it includes different programs of movies, games and television shows for people. For example, using the Internet during spare time for films or relaxing games can effectively mitigate many officers’s stress from a competitive workplace.
On the other hand, the Internet also causes people troubles besides its useful advantages. The first problem is that surfing the Internet without any time limitation could wreak havoc to people’s eyesight. For instance, staring at the phone or computer screen too long when using the Internet could precipitate the process of shortsightedness. The Internet also has a weak filtration of information; thus, the society could be deceived by misleading news. There are many malicious posts about social or economic news on Facebook that might intend to mislead people. Therefore, being exposed to many of these news on the Internet might create a distortion in some people’s awareness about a particular problem, which is harmful to the unity of a society.
In conclusion, although the Internet is a revolutionary invention that can direct people to access and entertain them with ease, it is undeniable that using it without scrupulousness could damage people’s eyesight and social awareness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1759.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.496875 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94307814785 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2964351434 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.266666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17319778401 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663135531683 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477216240657 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112041832775 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040372941307 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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