The internet is becoming more and more central to our lives as it provides more and more information acts as interactive entertainment and as a means of voting etc These functions have obvious benefits but there are dangers involved in the control the int

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The internet is becoming more and more central to our lives, as it provides more and more information, acts as interactive entertainment, and as a means of voting, etc. These functions have obvious benefits, but there are dangers involved in the control the internet is exerting our lives.
What benefits are involved?
What dangers are involved?
How far do you agree or disagree with the opinion expressed?

It is an undeniable verity that technology have an imperative impact on every person's life. Internet is one of the greatest invention of technology, which is a great source of information, along with, there are some other benefits as well. It is a good source of entertainment and an effective means of voting. However, there are some other demerits as well. I will enunciate both boons and dangers of it.

To begin with, there is abundance of information is available on internet. The person can search any type of information related with sports, news, industries, education and many more. Moreover, the information is available for every age group from juvenile to senior citizen. For instance, the student can search information related with education, employees can find jobs, business owners can find useful business tips. Secondly, the internet plays a crucial role for the entertainment purpose as well. Masses can not only listen music, can watch movies, but also communicate with their friends and family on social media. Thirdly, e-voting is becoming means of voting for multifarious television shows.

However, in spite of positive side, there is negative impact as well. Primarily, as internet include every kind of information, thus, this information is use for bad purposes by terrorist, thieves. Moreover, this information contained restricted material which have a bad impact on youth. Pen ultimately, as individual is using Internet for their entertainment, hence, they are not spending this crucial time with their parents and family. Ultimately, Internet may negatively afflict the voting process, by doing fake voting which is very easy with the help of Internet.

To sum up, everything have a negative side, it is based on the usage of it. It is irrefutable that interest is controlling the human beings life. Therefore, it become necessary to understand the exact usage of Internet. Otherwise, it would become the reason for being robot for people.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (9 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...logy have an imperative impact on every persons life. Internet is one of the greatest i...
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Line 7, column 134, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'beings'' or 'being's'?
Suggestion: beings'; being's
... that interest is controlling the human beings life. Therefore, it become necessary to...
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Line 7, column 161, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...ng the human beings life. Therefore, it become necessary to understand the exact usage...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, well, for instance, kind of, in spite of, to begin with, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30158730159 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8647763987 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1706589171 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5238095238 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.95238095238 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115788858779 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0333977922359 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0256466419422 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0657886297665 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00519980346444 0.056905535591 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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