In the Globalized world among the various inventions created by mankind one of the most important is Cyberspace. There are both positives and negatives with the internet . In my view, positive effects are more than the problems created by it.
In the routine life we utilize Net in many forms such as locating the address, Sending money to others, Paying bills like electricity, mobile recharges. Also because of internet people are able to perform their jobs sitting at home. Various applications like face book, Twitter, Instagram are helping the people stay connected not only from one area but also through out the world. In addition, online shopping is also made a available because of this. Moreover, people are able to consult doctors and explain their health issues sitting at home because of the same.Thus, Inter web made human life easy in all aspects thus reducing the work to go out and creating comfort to its users.
On the other hand, There are many drawbacks for Internet if it is misused or overused. Sometimes, Information available in the web may be inaccurate. Students get addicted to net thus waste their valuable time on computers, laptops rather than spending the same time on studies. It is a belief that the online shopping goods are not up to the mark when compared to the goods taken directly from shop. In a study conducted by University of Bristol it is found that about 30% of the teenagers are not using the internet in a proper manner . Instead they are utilizing it to watch blue films, porn videos. Children aged between 5 to 10 are getting used to internet thus reducing the play time which in turn is leading them to several health issues because of there static life style.
To summarize, There are many uses with internet. However, there are also many negatives with it. Nevertheless, Web can be considered as an important tool in modern human functioning such as its use in work and education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, in addition, such as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85843373494 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54248034759 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581325301205 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.190389757 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6111111111 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4444444444 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11143436517 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0374305293614 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03570857893 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0752585223419 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329562571831 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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