The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The process elucidates the method of manufacture of bricks necessary for Construction Industry.

Overall, it is found that the production of bricks include several steps such as Digging, Rolling, Moulding, Drying, Cooling, Packing and Delivery.

In the first step, Giant digger is used to remove the clay present in the ground. In the second step, The clay produced is passed through a metal grid and the some material remained is passed into a roller. In the third step, Sand and water are added to the rolled powder which is either cut in a wire cutter or pressed in a mould to achieve a desired brick shape. In the next step, the produced bricks are dried in an oven for 24 to 48 hours. After that they are passed into a large chamber with varying temperatures, Initially into a moderate temperature kiln of 200 to 980 degree celsius. Nextly to higher temperature kiln of 870 to 1300 degrees and later to a cooling chamber and left undisturbed for 48 to 72 hours. In the final step, packaging of the prepared bricks are done. Afterwards, they are delivery to the required construction sites

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Average: 8.9 (2 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...necessary for Construction Industry. Overall, it is found that the production...
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... of bricks include several steps such as Digging, Rolling, Moulding, Drying, Cool...
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...ying, Cooling, Packing and Delivery. In the first step, Giant digger is used...
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... Delivery. In the first step, Giant digger is used to remove the clay ...
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... is passed through a metal grid and the some material remained is passed into a roll...
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...erial remained is passed into a roller. In the third step, Sand and water are adde...
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...mould to achieve a desired brick shape. In the next step, the produced bricks are ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, so, third, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75916230366 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61162622532 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586387434555 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7367240827 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0984012255426 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439963154792 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523398397464 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0917001281262 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670794485083 0.0819641961636 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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