The internet has changed the way we communicate. Much communication today happens through social media. Some people support this and think it is a positive development. Others believe that social media have negative effects.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
After the rapid advent of social media and the new ways of communication the Internet offers, contrasting opinions about whether these advances are beneficial or deleterious have arisen. I am of the opinion that both views need to be considered in order to have a fair view of the topic.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that all these developments have created an infinite range of possibilities in terms of communication. Nowadays it is possible to feel you are travelling to any country just by viewing posts of social media influencers who visit the most remote places in the world and share their experiences with everyone. Personally, I have harnessed these new technologies, for instance, when I lived for six months in the Netherlands to communicate with my family. Had I been born 50 years ago, I wouldn't have been able to share pictures of my abroad adventure with my parents and friends, for example.
On the other hand, several downsides need to be evaluated. Despite physically bringing us together in some ways, I feel some aspects of these new ways of communication have also emotionally distanced many others. People only show the positive aspects of their lives on social media, which makes others suffer from self-love issues and envy. All these unwanted effects are even worse when it comes to teenagers, who are in many cases addicted to smartphones and give more importance to their virtual life than to the real one.
Overall, I think that, while social media has the great opportunity to become the main source of entertainment and a place to enrich ourselves by sharing experiences with others, it is in our hands to overcome the numerous threats these new developments bring.
- The internet has changed the way we communicate Much communication today happens through social media Some people support this and think it is a positive development Others believe that social media have negative effects Discuss both these views and give 84
- The internet has changed the way we communicate Much communication today happens through social media Some people support this and think it is a positive development Others believe that social media have negative effects Discuss both these views and give 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, may, regarding, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 900.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38813941732 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9016489089 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.571428571 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7142857143 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 5.23603664747 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130481596523 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649052314943 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048000727046 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0818420398747 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360742006836 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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