the internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades.Although some of these changes have been negative, the overall effect of thistechnology has been positive.

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the internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades.
Although some of these changes have been negative, the overall effect of this
technology has been positive.

The internet has changed people's lives in the way we never imagined decades ago.
Some people may say that Internet has a damaging effects to human's life whereas others would argue that it changes our life positively.This essay will argue that internet's effect give more positive effects such as unlimited source of information and makes our life more efficient in many aspects.
As for damaging ones, there are new kind of crimes that related to internet such as hacking, stealing personal information, online fraud, pornography which become so common nowadays. One of my colleague just lost millions rupiah that he gave to someone who hacked his friend facebook account. Also this past two months, atleast two 'private' porn videos of students in different provinces went viral in Indonesia and unfortunately it can be easily access even by minors.
Other than that, internet also makes people especially children to have addiction towards internet. it is not an uncommon things right now to witness kids spent hours with their smartphone whether play online games or just simply watch videos on youtube. I just read on facebook where some people shared their personal story about the effects of internet to their kids. There is a kid who just lost his vision, one kid had speech delay, and another one was diagnosed to have mental illness. I believe that just iceberg phenomenon and many more cases happened out there.
Despite all negative effects that come along, we cant deny that Internet makes our life easier just like the purpose of its invention. Internet provides millions source of information and knowledge such as Blogs, Ebooks, Journals and everyone especially students can easily access them. We can find out (almost) everything we want to know just by type some words in search engine. For students, there's online learning platform that provides high quality learning such as Ruang Guru, one of the most popular online learning platform in Inonesia which claimed to have 4 millions students in in various cities in 2017.
Besides, internet also makes people's life more efficient with all the services by using internet. Do internet banking, online shopping, even planning our travel can easily done just by clicking and typing in our gadgets. People can save much time and energy and spent it to another important things.
As conclusion, although internet may have bad effects for some of it users but we cant downgrade how it help human's life positively. As for bad effects, it can be decreased by using internet wisely and effectively.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 135, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...gue that it changes our life positively.This essay will argue that internets effect ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...spects. As for damaging ones, there are new kind of crimes that related to inter...
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Line 3, column 38, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'kinds'?
Suggestion: kinds
.... As for damaging ones, there are new kind of crimes that related to internet such...
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Line 3, column 214, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'millions'' or 'million's'?
Suggestion: millions'; million's
...nowadays. One of my colleague just lost millions rupiah that he gave to someone who hack...
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...who hacked his friend facebook account. Also this past two months, atleast two priva...
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Line 4, column 100, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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...ren to have addiction towards internet. it is not an uncommon things right now to ...
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Line 4, column 122, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'thing'?
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...towards internet. it is not an uncommon things right now to witness kids spent hours w...
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Line 4, column 384, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...f internet to their kids. There is a kid who just lost his vision, one kid had sp...
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Line 5, column 50, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ll negative effects that come along, we cant deny that Internet makes our life easie...
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Line 5, column 393, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
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...e words in search engine. For students, theres online learning platform that provides ...
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Line 5, column 416, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
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...e. For students, theres online learning platform that provides high quality learning suc...
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Line 5, column 584, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
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...ich claimed to have 4 millions students in in various cities in 2017. Besides, inter...
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
...bad effects for some of it users but we cant downgrade how it help humans life posit...
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Line 7, column 105, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...f it users but we cant downgrade how it help humans life positively. As for bad effe...
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Line 7, column 172, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... As for bad effects, it can be decreased by using internet wisely and effectively...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, so, whereas, as for, kind of, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2137.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 421.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07600950119 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46353447169 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567695961995 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 676.8 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5728664935 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.473684211 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1578947368 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47368421053 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157904751136 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506499904438 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461018317504 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895457971259 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364243209001 0.056905535591 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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