The internet has provided great benefits, but at the same time it has also created new problems. Is it possible to control some of these problems
Everyone in this world is indebted to the ones who put their relentless effort in developing internet of what it is today. It is hardly possible for one to imagine the world without it for it's contribution in various fields. However, nothing is this world is perfect and everything has its own disadvantages.
Now-a-days, Every topic under sun is just a finger tip away because of web. Internet made it easy to save enormous amount of data with a backup option whereas paper saved data is not so promising for longer periods. Infact, it used to take weeks perhaps months in few cases for a postal department to convey a simple message but now it is happening in less than a second. Also, there used to be a long queue burning in sun to pay the bills but now it is drastically changed because of the wireless network. No one have ever imagined to have a live video chat with someone who is continents away from us. Cyber space offers forums and chat rooms as a good platform to undergo discussions. All the research reports are easily accessed so to know what's happening in the scientific world.
Admittedly, the advantages equally weigh the disadvantages if web is not properly used. The privacy of the information about passwords and other personal details are hanging vulnerable as it can be easily abducted by the cyber vultures called hackers who can snatch it in seconds and cause life time damage. According to the reports of CNN , people are becoming obese for gluing to screens and losing their eyesight. Report also says , people tend to become more lazier than before by leading sedentary lifestyle which inturn is dangerous for their brain and heart function.
Conclusively, prioritising the cyberspace more than anything leads to many complications in life which include physical, mental, relationships and security of our income. So, i think people should be determined to take care of themselves in all the above mentioned aspects and start meditation, spend time in parks and to give quality time to family members which ensures a good well balanced life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, so, well, whereas, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1725.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88668555241 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70063729098 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628895184136 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5987938437 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.8125 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0625 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0500184052751 0.244688304435 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0136408898815 0.084324248473 16% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0160740486478 0.0667982634062 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0296803994021 0.151304729494 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00550791722342 0.056905535591 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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