The internet has transformed how we interact and live in many great ways, but also created problems that didn't exist before. What are the problems and solutions?
The internet has affected our lifestyles and communication with other people drastically. In this essay, I will discuss the problems that come with internet usage and I will suggest possible solutions to these issues. Firstly, I will share a problem related to the internet and a viable solution and secondly, I will discuss another related issue and suggest a possible solution.
To begin with, one of the biggest problems of internet usage is that in some ways, it makes people physically less active. Nowadays, there are lots of applications and websites that you can purchase anything you want, from dinner to groceries to clothes, without even going outside of your house. One solution to this problem could be limiting internet shopping and going to stores by ourselves. As a result of this, people will spend more time active, which will make them healthier. They would support the local shops and restaurants as well.
Another issue related to the internet might be that it is not a safe place all the time. There are lots of people scamming others online, by selling fake products, stealing their card numbers and identities. A possible solution to this is governments making more serious legislation regarding cybercrime. If people feel like they will be punished for their online crimes, they would get scared and would stop taking advantage of others.
In conclusion, the problems associated with the internet are becoming a major issue in many countries. In my opinion, it is possible to make the internet a much better place with individuals' and governments efforts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10769230769 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66368299551 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561538461538 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.1362037223 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.8571428571 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14355367131 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573518080581 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588491889261 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0971256087934 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422501903928 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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