The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before.
What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?
Internet is vital tool in everyday life, allowing quick access to any kind of information, but it also posseses problems when it is used excessively. Although internet overuse problem seems to not have any effective solutions, there are still possible ways out of this problem.
First of all, excessive use of the internet implies use of the digital gadgets, like computers and phones. As a result, people worsen their eyesight deu to fact that during the use of gadgets people tend to link less, which dries eye surface. Moreover, such use of the internet forces people to be physically less active and leads to hypodynamy, which in turn affects backbone and back posture. A good idea would be to make people aware of the possible threats of excessive internet use, as well as to encourage people to exercise more. This will lead to reduction of health problems within society.
Secondly, people can communicate whenever and wherever they are, which affects the way people look at internet conversations due to the instant access. As a result, people do not value the internet communications, but at the same time prefer them to real ones in some cases. If people could understand that internet forces people to neglect real-life conversations and sometimes deteriorate social skills, then social problems caused by internet will be reduced.
To conclude, I think that internet use causes various problems. However, those problems can be in erased by spread awareness of those problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, well, as to, i think, kind of, as a result, as well as, first of all, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13524590164 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69120655413 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614754098361 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9349089616 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.416666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.75 7.06120827912 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184304743418 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787137382108 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464139454881 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130318072783 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488728830655 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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