The Internet is now used all around the world as a source of information and communication. However, it's often controversial, so many people think it needs to be controlled. Others believe there should be no interference whatsoever.
Discuss both points of view, and give your opinion.
In this digitalization world, the internet has been becoming popular across the globe in the day to day basis and it is very convenient for people, however; majority of people believe that it is needs to be reduced usage of internet. Others averse that people should whatever want to do without any barrier. Both the views will be justified in the following paragraphs and give proper opinion.
To commence, why some people think to be controlled on internet, the first and foremost reason is that fraud cases has been snowballing in the market due to internet by which the local people are becoming victim of cyber-attack. Sometime without permission of people money has deduct from the bank account. In the recent survey of British Journal of Cyber Department published one reported that between 2017 to 2018, 29% of fraud cases has been proliferated due to net banking in Russia. In addition to this, Majority of children spend their more time with electronics-gadgets because internet facility provided by the tele-communicating companies. As a ramification, children are becoming more addicted towards web communication application like oracle as well as snap chats.
Conversely, there should be no restriction on the internet users because it can provide vital information of the globe, it is a pillar of crucial information by which people can aware about what is happening in the country as well as social knowledge. There are innumerable application available on the internet like google duo, Instagram and Gmail application where people take video call and communicate with relatives and friends. Therefor, it is time saving for human being because nowadays people are following hectic schedule by which they can not able to meet face to face.
In the final analysis, the reflection exhibited leads to firmly assert that internet is very crucial for the society and it can help to change globalization. If the law enforcement authority will not take stringent step on cyber-attack than the future of nation look bleak in the years to come.
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- The Internet is now used all around the world as a source of information and communication. However, it's often controversial, so many people think it needs to be controlled. Others believe there should be no interference whatsoever.Discuss both poin 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 278, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'deducted'.
Suggestion: deducted
... without permission of people money has deduct from the bank account. In the recent su...
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Line 7, column 159, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nd it can help to change globalization. If the law enforcement authority will not ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, however, if, look, so, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1725.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16467065868 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96762171751 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577844311377 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.0667396051 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.692307692 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6923076923 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199053127896 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637890356543 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586495035421 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116378726919 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777176555242 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.