The charts show the amount and quality of water supplied to two regions of the world.

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The charts show the amount and quality of water supplied to two regions of the world.

The chart delineates Australian and South East Asian people can supply water as well as its degree of cleanliness in water in the years 1990 and 2010. Unit is measured in percentage.

As an overall assessment, it is explicitly observed that the use of water has been proliferated by people while the degree of cleanliness had been descent in South East Asia as compared to Australia.

In the preliminary stage, it is unequivocal that Australia was the highest water supplier as compared to South East Asia in both years. Australian people were supplied water from 80% to 100% in 1990 to 2010, which was a huge increase in the use of water. Moreover, in South East Asia, the demand for water was doubled as compared to 1990. However, the proportion of cleanliness steadily surged between 1990 and 2010 in Australia while South East Asia reveals the pattern of cleanliness was dwindling throughout of period. There was descent of almost 4% in the last year of the graph.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 91, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ustralia was the highest water supplier as compared to South East Asia in both yea...
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Line 7, column 241, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o 2010, which was a huge increase in the use of water. Moreover, in South East As...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, well, while, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 812.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8622754491 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69359927788 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526946107784 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.751712302 43.030603864 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.5 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114424617676 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565533421793 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626458977289 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0941083184195 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05325820083 0.0819641961636 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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