Different people have different views about internet, majority of people believe that it is a good method of communication, on the contrary, some of the people have negative views regarding communication through internet. In my opinion, it is a good mode of communication, however, there are also some drawbacks in this method of communication.
Nowadays, internet is main source of communication among people because it makes the world a global village, as a result, people from different cultures and countries can interact with each other through social media platforms, which was not possible in ancient times. From instance, if a student from Asia wants to get admission in a university of European country, he or she can interact with a student of specific university through a Facebook page and can get information about university environment and fee structures. Moreover, by talking to people of different countries we can know about their way of thinking, as a result, we can also improve our own communication skills in this way.
On the other hand, internet also have a negative impact on our communication skills in some ways. To illustrate, when people spend most their time on internet they become introverts, as a result, they start avoiding interaction with people of their society, even with their siblings in some particular situations. As a result, a large communication gap start developing among people living in same houses. Thus, people start sharing their problems with social media friends rather than real life friends, parents and siblings. These all conditions occur due to lack of communication skills, because of using internet without any limitations.
In conclusion, it seems to me that internet can improve our communication skills rather than destroying, if we can use it in a better way by implementing proper limitations
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2861952862 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07211704885 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525252525253 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.9832655545 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.727272727 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5454545455 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169856976905 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781446461737 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617889493053 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116024084183 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363981560444 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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