Internet when used as a source of information, has more drawbacks than advantages.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
The Internet has been receiving a great deal of public attention because of its source of information. In my opinion, it has brought both drawbacks and benefits.
There is a variety of reasons why the Internet has many advantages. Firstly, thanks to the internet, people can have access to thousands of the source of information less than a second. This means that when people do research about their subjects, they can find out some relevant information by a click of the mouse. By doing this, it can save a great deal of time seeking people’s materials. Secondly, the Internet facilitates to form of communication in companies. For instance, the Internet helps members of a group of a corporation socialize with each other to cope with their work via online reference. It could lead their work to be handled easily without any physical travel from here to there.
Nevertheless, there are many reasons why the Internet has many setbacks. Firstly, people can get into trouble with their quality of work when they access the internet. It is because that if people click on unreliable information or materials, it will make their work reduce or mislead dangerously. Secondly, the internet is likely to put people in jeopardy in case the frequency of their communication via the internet undertake often. In other words, people excessively stick to contact throughout the internet, they then will reduce the quality of social circle. As a result, these people get involved in being isolated from outside in case of maintaining this issue frequently.
In conclusion, there are benefits to the internet, but there are disadvantages too. However, if people take adequate precautions, the severity of these negative impacts can be avoided.
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- some people think that it is important to have a single language as an international official language. Others think that it will make it difficult to identify countries and cause a loss of culture. What are your opinions on this? 61
- Internet when used as a source of information, has more drawbacks than advantages. To what extent do you agree with this statement? 61
- Topic 1: With the pressures on today’s young people to succeed academically, some people believe that non-academic subjects at school (e.g: physical education and cookery) should be removed from the syllabus so that children can concentrate wholly on ac 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1514084507 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88489033476 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549295774648 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.5906016485 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.0588235294 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7058823529 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64705882353 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185840518846 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627519070866 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401371533742 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111430851243 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572000287032 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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