‘The Internet will never replace traditional course books in schools.’ How far do you agree with this prediction?
School is a place where we can study and have an enormous knowledge. Some people think as time passed, internet will replace books, especially traditional course books, while the other have their own way of thinking. They sure that internet will never replace book's position. As I'm concerned, I'm agree with the last statement, especially because I ever felt those both situations.
As we all have known, schools is one of the most important thing in life. Plenty of people willing to do anything to get education precisely in school. Back then, books are really important to schools' life. But since technology keeps improving, thesedays some schools have been using internet as a "book".
Some people believe that technology and internet will replace books' position in schools, or even can be better than books. We can surf the internet as far as we want with no barrier. The internet also gives us opportunity to do anything we never experienced, such as video call without thinking how far we are and knowing other's identity without asking other people.
On the other hand, by using internet we just make our real relationship with others smaller. We barely see each other and talk face to face with them. In study case, most of student can't study well with many excuses. Internet is not a cheap thing, we have to buy it in an expensive range of money. The less money we got, the worse connection we have. we must keep purchasing in a huge amount of money for internet connection so we can study. WHile if we use books, we don't need to buy for internet and we can study well with the book that we have. There are so many explanations in books and obviously they are easy to get understand.
Nowadays, by corona virus pandemic, everybody studying via online. As my own and my friend's experience, it's kind of hard to study via internet and not doing it face to face. We can't ask our teacher directly, and of course it makes us difficult to understand the material given. We have to join zoom and class on time, even though we have a bad internet connection and couldn't do it on time. If we just give them that excuses, they won't believe us and think that we're lying though we're not.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that internet will never replace traditional course books. Traditional course books have their own way to teach us in a more understanding way than internet can. I'm also prefer to spend my money on books than on expensive internet connection.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, then, well, while, in conclusion, kind of, of course, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 24.0651302605 212% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2061.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 435.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73793103448 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58124581633 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494252873563 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 643.5 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1623806375 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.3333333333 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1111111111 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.96296296296 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275821555191 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883827159663 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761150255957 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179574190315 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0800336833449 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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