The Invention of the Internet was a considerable revolution in people's relationships. to what extent do you agree with this statement?
The Invention of the Internet was a considerable revolution.It simply snails everywhere in no time and noticeably sparked off the start of social media .In my view,If we widen our horizons we could absolutely understand social media upgrade the level of lifestyle and relationships.
Firstly,as soon as the bomb of the invention of the net explode applications connect all over the world together and have a huge effect on the improvement of the relationships.History proves that there were desperate last-minute scrambles of critics against new inventions such as the net due to no one was aware of significance of the net at the time.However,when they saw the net make appearance everywhere since they follow the lead of secretive nature of the net most of them swiftly change their tunes.
Secondly,there was evidence of the simplitic claim that some people think before the net and social media Life was more simple than today and the relationships were friendlier however,as one of the Sociologists puts it“changing in relationships and expanding social media are pols apart and If we have optimistic attitude We will easily find out without social media relationships will fade more”.It should consider that decreasing the devotion in relationships is not caused by social media so what is the originally reason?
Lastly , it was argued that despite the ideas that social media has bad effects on humans relationships clear illustrations such as exchanging emails between individuals who do not meet ever and making friends all over the world that are seen for the time being could show that humans remarkably owe social media in several aspects.
To sum up,I acknowledge that devotion is fading among humans but it is not caused by social media even the reverse is true.Admittedly today life could not be imagine without social media.
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- ِDo you think studying in European countries is better than studying in Iran? state your reasons. 76
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but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, such as, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23154362416 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21901098858 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58389261745 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 20.2975951904 291% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 133.62035773 49.4020404114 270% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 311.8 106.682146367 292% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.6 20.7667163134 287% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.8 7.06120827912 266% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0941574533673 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520413613934 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357438621634 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0520413613934 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357438621634 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.0 13.0946893788 252% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 3.13 50.2224549098 6% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.5 11.3001002004 243% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.54 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.6 10.1190380762 253% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.