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It is believed that people’s health will be worse in the future than is it today. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
With the emerge of modern technology and science, it is true that in the future there is high possibility of curing diseases such as AIDS,CANCERS,DIABETES and so on. Thus , I am disagreeing with the above statement. Please allow me to explain by mentioning the following points to support my essay.
Firstly, We cannot deny that technology have contributed a drastic changes in medical science.These days we have almost all the necessary medical equipment's
to facilitate major surgeries regardless how complex it is. For example, Cardiovascular disease, We all know that this is on of the most d...
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technology have contributed a drastic changes
technologies have contributed drastic changes
all the necessary medical equipment's to facilitate major surgeries
all the necessary medical equipment to facilitate major surgeries
However, compare to those days,
However, compared to those days,
a researches have be proved that
researches have proved that
it was function for about 90 days.
it was in function for about 90 days.
even though it was failure at the end
even though it was in failure at the end
in the future this will 'go with the a bang' .
Description: The fragment go with is rare
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