Education one of the most basic needs for the country to progress. Because students' needs diverse education institutes need to recognize this diversity. Some people would prefer a single gender institute to educate their children, but others would prefer multiple gender institute.
First of all, students from the same sex share many interests and requirements. Education institutes focusing on one gender will be able to concentrate the resources it has and provide effective education. teachers will be able to teach effectively as they will teach student having the same mentality. Secondly, Discipline problems will be avoided when teaching male and female students separately. A recent study showed that gender diversity in educational academies led to an increase in legal problems in comparison to the school of the same sex.
On the other hand, people will argue that gender is not relative in education, and we should not waste resources on colleges that discriminate on students based on their gender, and also, the cost that needed to operate schools with the male and female student will be less than the cost required when they are separate. Secondly, mixed schools are important for developing students' social life. As the students grow they will be in contact with the real world and they will have to communicate with others. The mixed school will provide the student with real-life experience that will be vital for their success in life.
In my opinion, students showed attend mixed gender schools as these schools will prove them with much-needed experience in life, and I totally agree with the advocate for this kind of school, about the money and how it should be spent
- Some people believe that it is good to share as much as information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too invaluable to be shared freely.Discuss both views and five yo 56
- Some people think that money is one of the most essential factors in promoting happiness.Do you think people can be happy without much money? what other factors contribute towards happiness? 56
- It is better for boys and girls to study separately rather than study in mixed sex classes. they are less distracted and this leads to better results.Do you agree or disagree with the statement? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...asic needs for the country to progress. Because students needs diverse education instit...
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...it has and provide effective education. teachers will be able to teach effectively as th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, kind of, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17391304348 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57904852288 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532608695652 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.1442194035 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.846153846 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106845770904 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445053222581 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333359638505 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0687550174359 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327817094292 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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