An increasing number of teenagers select tertiary education institutes, which are situated far away from their hometowns. The principal positive effect of this phenomenon is remarkable academic opportunities, and it outweighs the negative result of loneliness.
Being lonely is the main challenge of pursuing degrees in faraway universities. This is to say that as education centers are many miles away from home and teenagers have to leave their families for the first time in their lives. Living alone in students' accommodations and adjusting lifestyle to lead lives without loved ones beside them lead to homesickness. For example, many students from remote areas at the University of Colombo abandoned their courses in the first year of studies due to homesickness. However, I believe that this is a temporary problem, and as teenagers can shape their lives without family and relatives within few months, reputed universities should not be disregard.
Renowned universities and popular auxiliary courses are usually found in major cities. In other words, tertiary education centers in urban areas offer the country's best academic courses, up-to-date technology, and all the facilities individuals need to obtain knowledge and, therefore, graduates are in a better position to get job opportunities in reputed companies. For instance, it is well known in Sri Lanks that doctors who passed out from the Colombo university are more talented than those who obtained their degrees from Ragama University, situated 200 km away from the capital city. Therefore, I am in the opinion of studying in distance universities and colleges.
In conclusion, despite loneliness, attending a famous organization, which is away from home, for higher education brings the advantage of accessing novel technology, facilities, and knowledge. Therefore, the benefits of this tendency far outweigh the drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 156, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'countrys the best'.
Suggestion: countrys the best
...cation centers in urban areas offer the countrys best academic courses, up-to-date technology...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61458333333 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0326616288 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607638888889 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.025142661 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.384615385 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220619389298 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672003328915 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598506978991 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122445131186 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469177465003 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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