It is better for college students to live far away from home than live at home with their parents.
Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, the number of universities and other educational centers has increased significantly and they has spread all around the world. Sometimes students prefer to study at a reptable university which is in the other city or even in a foreign country. According to experts, it is a valuable opportunity to become independent. I agree with this idea because of couple of reasons.
First of all, it should be stuck in mind that all families used to support their children, both emotionally and financially, since they were born and it cause children to become depended. At the age of 18, when they should go to college, they are enough mature to become independent and manage their own life. When they have to live alone, they will learn how to make decision when they faced problems. Also, they learn how to control their expense according to their budget. They have to rely on their abilities which has considerable impact on their self-confidence. They will learn some life skills and sociable behavior.
Another thing that should be mentioned, is about living with peers which is the best way to promote the intellectual and emotional maners. Besides, the academic years is the great period to establish a business with corporation of friends. Apple is an outstanding instance of this kind of activities which is initiated from university.
It is noteworthy that student need their family support everywhere and whenever. But this separation would help them to empower their character and become mature.
Taking everything into consideration, it seems to me that student should take advantages of this gold years which is a great opportunity to get enough experiences and useful skills such as managing financial issue or lunching new business.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 105, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...rs has increased significantly and they has spread all around the world. Sometimes ...
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Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
...inancially, since they were born and it cause children to become depended. At the age...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, so, another thing, kind of, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15734265734 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85308043595 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597902097902 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.4624440347 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1875 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122085517173 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421659033028 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0286331299795 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0645546902502 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238713489622 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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