Cricket has become more popular than the national sports in the sub-continental countries.
What do you think are the reasons behind this?
Nowadays, some specific sports are becoming more and more popular among people, no matters of which continent they are from. Cricket is one of these sports which has plenty of fans around the world, even more, that some traditional and national sports. This essay discusses some possible causes that lead to this matter.
To beginning, it should be stuck that most of the people prefer and enjoy watching exciting match more than those ones which are less exciting. Since cricket is one of the most exciting match, it seems that the main reason to be more popular is lined in this fact. For illustrate, wrestling that is considered as a national sport for some countries, in comparison with cricket has got less popularity.
On the other hand, rules of cricket make the players to work as a team member and also, to support their peers. It could be a good reason for popularity because this situation leads to more collaboration and promote a sense of unity and can bring people together more than those single-player sports. For example, Ski, which is a national sport for some countries, is a single-player, although they could attend as a team, some people believe it is a boring match.
Another point that should be mentioned is about being entertainment which cricket is enough entertaining so can attract the attention of a big proportion of people, especially young generations.
In conclusion, with regards to the popularity trend of cricket which is an upward trend, there are some reasons that result in more popularity rather than national sports such as being more exciting, bring people more closely and create a sense of homogeneity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 109, Rule ID: THESE_ONES[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'those' instead.
Suggestion: those
...enjoy watching exciting match more than those ones which are less exciting. Since cricket ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03249097473 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66467080275 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527075812274 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.9737659576 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.727272727 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1818181818 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289107658326 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121329581929 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666565035217 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170822692525 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778357591561 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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