It is debatable topic that whether it is a good way to know about the life of older people by movies and video record that how the live or in the written documents. I agree with this notion and in this essay I will highlight the valid reasons to substantiate the same in upcoming paragraphs.
On the one hand, it is better way to individuals life by films and videos. First and foremost, people can understand their culture and tradition better as compared to by reading some documentary books.To explicate it, because in movies and video records individuals can see their outfits clearly and also know about how they do their daily work. Moreover, persons also learn about their cultures and what kind of work they do in the past. to epitome, a survey is conducted by oxford university in 2016 has revealed that 70% of young generation know about the lifestyles of older people through videos and movies which is good thing and they also feel connected with them.
Furthermore, through movies and videos mortals also learn about their food and also how they ploughing their food like wheat,rice other kind of crops. Due to which they also use same technique nowadays and earn profit by selling in markets. To exemplify, according to the government majority of individuals do agriculture because they learn from their old generations and also through watching movies.
On they flip side, it is also good way to learn people lives in past through documents. Because there are some individuals those who do not have video recorders, televisions and any other source though which they can watch old generation lifestyle. Due to this they need documents or any other books source by which they can learn and know regarding the way of people lived in past. For instance, in this contemporary era, there are few persons those who living in slum areas and do not have any source of watching movies and videos.
To recapitulate, I believe that movies and video records are the better way to know about past of the people through this people can understand their lifestyles well. However, written documents also necessary for those who do not have televisions at home which we can ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1823.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8743315508 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53340658638 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.446524064171 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.113807085 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.533333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9333333333 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278078974881 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113174154083 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732564877505 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171910055483 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592141347665 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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