It is better for people to be unemployed than being employed with a job they do not enjoy. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people argue that it is superior to wait for a dream job rather than work in an unsuitable field. Opinion, I agree that unemployment is better than being employed because it will bring several detrimental effects on the people.
Firstly, one prominent reason behind unemployment is physical and mental health problems. If someone is not interested in that work they have not only performed poorly but also will be part of several diseases and this impact affects other family members. For instance, depression, anxiety, and cancer are part of mental illness. Consequently, the chances of death rates might increase.
Secondly, another reason for joblessness is that, brought working issues with companies boss and colleagues. A person who does not concentrate on their work might be harmful to the company's economy and to relations with other employees which leads to the risk of losing their job.
Finally, one more aspect is that being unemployed can proffer more opportunities to give others' interests and develop new skills. When someone works in one job they do not have time and energy for other activities. Moreover, new opportunities unlock new career paths so it is great to be patient for suitable work which can be fruitful for their future.
In recapitulation, work is an essential part of people's lives. I deem that, it is reasonable for people to work in their interests fields. This not only improves their ability but also promotes their position in the company and society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1262.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13008130081 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72071199851 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59756097561 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9953349661 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1428571429 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26967899686 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854702791933 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658287760722 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146217644886 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0818464349274 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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