Some people consider price as most important thing to buy product (such as cell phone) or service (e.g. medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree?
Some individuals think that price is performed a vital role, to buy or purchase a product such as electronics or a service such as hospitality. Opinion, I disagree that price is not considered a crucial factor, others are equally essential.
First of all, one prominent reason to buy the product is the quality. If a person buys an item such as clothes, so they first check whether the material is suitable or not. Following this, a product's long-lasting ness is also essential as a use. Moreover, a person also checks how the product is useful for their future.
Secondly, another reason behind buying the product is the requirement of the product. How the product is beneficial to them. In other words, When people purchase an item such as iPhone or an expensive car so they determine the features and guarantee or warranty of the item and if it is sufficient then they might decide to purchase.
Lastly, one more aspect to consider is the after-sales service of the goods and services. When people purchase a new product they also demand the service of it. In other words, if the manufacturing company provides a good service then customers trust the products and increased the production of the product.
In recapitulation, people should not only focus on the cost of products, other aspects are also playing critical roles to pay for an item and also deliberate carefully before spending large sums of money. so, it is also useful for them in cases of emergency.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 190, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a product' or simply 'products'?
Suggestion: a product; products
...ial is suitable or not. Following this, a products long-lasting ness is also essential as ...
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Line 7, column 91, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ales service of the goods and services. When people purchase a new product they also...
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Line 9, column 206, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...ly before spending large sums of money. so, it is also useful for them in cases of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, such as, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87301587302 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76662158803 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535714285714 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7792340652 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7142857143 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224044111237 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859401272996 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061122409505 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137752845256 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0882024971044 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.