It is better for young to get an advice from old people than young people. Do you agree or disagree.
In today's globalized, urbanised and the over-populated world, more and more individuals are getting an advices from old people in order to making for more desirable future. There are those who say that it is benificial for the young masses who are collecting some advices however others believe that young individuals have more information about real life. I agree with this idea and In this essay I will provide some contentious arguments to support an overall opinion.
From an overall perspective, perhaps the most compelling reason why getting advices from older people are better for young generations is because they have more life experience. This mean that old people are know, how to spend real life with out feel any challenges than young masses. For example, A recent research concluded by the Harvard University 25% of Chinese people who were successful in own businesses, because they got more information from old people. A further point in favour of this phenomenon could be that Older people tell ideas more deeply to young generation. As a result, Every person can understand easily.
Despite these arguments, there is also a case for the idea might be that young people have less life experience. This is because they want to get good result more quickly with out doing any hard work. The result of this phenomenon could be that they would not complete their desire dreams, and also they will fell lonely, isolated and alienated which in turn leads to personal problems such as depression and alcoholism. The decision as to whether we should fallow the ideas of old individuals must be seen in the context of the entire society.
To sum up, this is a topic which is very relevant to the contemporary society overall, I would have to say that I agree with the idea is because older people have more real life experience. If young generation ask more questions from old people, it will be better for them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an advice' or simply 'advices'?
Suggestion: an advice; advices
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Suggestion: known
...perience. This mean that old people are know, how to spend real life with out feel a...
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Suggestion: without
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Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
...ey want to get good result more quickly with out doing any hard work. The result of this...
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Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...depression and alcoholism. The decision as to whether we should fallow the ideas of old indiv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, as to, for example, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92966360856 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57448404364 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519877675841 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9709201879 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.142857143 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3571428571 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352832581862 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129457276833 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0949611164488 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236956150101 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0918298955547 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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