Gone are the days when people embrace the traditional nine-to-five office jobs. In the era of entrepreneurship, those who crave personal fulfillment and economic prosperity are spurred to launch their own business instead of being employed by a company. In spite of the potential rewards awaiting those self-employed adventurers, I think it unwise to follow this trend as the drawbacks of starting up one’s own business outweigh its benefits.
Without a doubt, people who run business start-ups have considerable autonomy over their work. In comparison with the employees being restricted by the rules of a job, those self-employed business proprietors have complete authority over any decision related to the business and enjoy the flexibility of their work schedules. For example, a restaurant owner can take a decision to raise prices or open a new branch to expand his business whenever required. Moreover, without a strict daily routine, he is free to set his own working hours and come and go as he pleases.
Nevertheless, starting up your own business involves considerable risks of incurring financial distress. It generally requires an initial start-up cost to launch a small business, while the biggest obstacle most fledgling entrepreneurs might encounter is the difficulty in securing a large amount of venture capital. To address this financial problem, they might either apply for a bank loan with high interest or mortgage their house, land and property to begin their business. However, chances are their business does not succeed and that they have no choice but to liquidate their company, thereby sinking deeper into debt and facing insolvency.
In conclusion, I argue that the drawbacks of setting up one’s own enterprise surpass the benefits, for people would definitely experience much more stress than those employed by a company. Although they could have greater control over the work they are passionate about, they could not overlook the fact that the threat of insolvency. Once people get bogged down in a quagmire of a financial fiasco, their own business can become a heavy burden with their aspirations turning into a nightmare. Since we should prioritize our financial security, it is unreasonable to gamble our well-being on risky business start-ups.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 6, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
Gone are the days when people embrace the tradit...
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Line 2, column 98, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: comparison,
...nsiderable autonomy over their work. In comparison with the employees being restricted by ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1935.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36011080332 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95647428068 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603878116343 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0064594631 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195258724908 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641989381164 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402166293639 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118361834393 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277743787966 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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