It is a common aspiration among many young people to run their own business. Rather than work for an employer.
Do you think the advantages of working for yourself overweigh the drawbacks?
There is no doubt that People are different, every person has own aspirations, point of view and, dreams. According to their point of view and ideas, people have various preferences toward their position in the job field. Some people want to work in company where they can feel secure, whist others choose self-employment due to its high profit. In my view, both sides have own advantages according to people’s expectations.
First and foremost, there are several advantages of making your own business such as high profit, independence, and leaving huge inheritance. People have tended to make c...
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