Working for a charity is considered to be a selfless act today. Nowadays the young High school's graduates consider helping the world outside performing humanitarian jobs for which they opt for a gap year before going on for their future Degrees. Though this practice of voluntary work will aid in the development of the young adult's personality traits but with the exposure to the omen figures around this underdeveloped region are also putting their lives in danger.
The charitable works in underdeveloped countries help in gaining valuable humanity and personality traits. A sense of responsibility is being infused which leads to improvement of in-person personality traits but also creates a consideration for the underprivileged. The previous president of USA Barrack Obama was a social worker since the beginning of his career and with a sense to provide assistance to whosoever, he gained confidence towards his traits which lead him to perform gallantry acts and eventually become a 2 term President. The future being uncertain, these traits are beneficial in the progression of a human and these common practices can be one of the ways to develop such a habit.
Although, the point to migrate to an underdeveloped country where there are a number of illegal activities going on can be dangerous. The countries who don't have a proper government might be under the rule of some criminal lords which will try to disrupt the living conditions of the local natives. With such a harsh lifestyle and constant disruptions from the local individuals, even the act to perform charitable work will be quite a task. This could eventually lead to a waste of precious time and in the worst-case scenario of precious life.
In conclusion, no matter what or how many of the humanitarian tasks a human being performs of whatever impact on them or the underprivileged, there will be some person trying to halt the progression.
- It is common practice for some students to take a gap year between high school and university in order to do charitable work abroad in underdeveloped countries What are the advantages and disadvantages for young people of doing volunteer work 89
- Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity. Some people think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 327, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'adults'' or 'adult's'?
Suggestion: adults'; adult's
...ill aid in the development of the young adults personality traits but with the exposur...
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Line 2, column 703, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ne of the ways to develop such a habit. Although, the point to migrate to an underdevelo...
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Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... on can be dangerous. The countries who dont have a proper government might be under...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08227848101 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06817792031 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579113924051 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.0637483799 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.833333333 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168070425392 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660157020236 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609760377204 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101502464833 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0828991512613 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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