It is debated that ragging should be banned in educational institutes whereas others disagree. Discuss both views.
In this modern era, in school and colleges, ragging had became a grave concern among the students .it has been suggested by some experts that in educational centres, there should be restriction on ragging whereas, others people have opposite views.this essay will elborate both the opinions .From my perpectives, the former point of view is more convincing
On the one hand, in traditional time, ragging was considered as a introducing method in colleges.When a new students is entered in colleges then seniors tried to introduced with new leaner's unique skills and talents through ragging along with this, it also boosted the confidence level of students to performed in the front of crowd.In addition to it, ragging is good source of entertainment for students.Owing to performed different recretional activities such as dance, singing, painting, cracking jokes in front of others students, they enjoy these activities which help to spend some quality of time together.
On the other hand which i trends towards due to having too much ragging in educational institutes, it impacted badly on students.When senior students teasing junior students on basis on their caste, religion and colour then junior students goes into stress or depression and try to do wrong tasks such as commiting crimes.Recently, in Jupan, a college students committed suicide because of two others students and they got imprisoned.Moreover, when seniors show their authoritative nature to juniors, which can also demotivate their dreams, inspiration and expectation and its arises fear among the students against college as well as seniors students.
Looking ay both sides, I would like to conclude that although, there are umpteen of benefits having ragging in school and colleges but it create too much violence among the learners
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, then, well, whereas, in addition, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45422535211 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99962802693 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640845070423 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 94.0 20.2975951904 463% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 327.545416698 49.4020404114 663% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 516.333333333 106.682146367 484% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 94.6666666667 20.7667163134 456% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 35.6666666667 7.06120827912 505% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143848039956 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931224017784 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480012530454 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0968167070609 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639104241834 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 51.6 13.0946893788 394% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -23.93 50.2224549098 -48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 40.0 11.3001002004 354% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.51 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.75 8.58950901804 148% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 58.0 9.78957915832 592% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 39.6 10.1190380762 391% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 40.0 10.7795591182 371% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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