Today more and more students are deciding to move to different countries for higher studies. do you think benefits outweigh the problmes
It is irrefutable fact that majority of students give preference to moving foreign countries for their higher education. This essay intends to delve that advantages of this trend outweigh its disadvantage
Needless to say,there are countless merits of this trend .The most conspicuous one is the case of better job opportunities after completing studies. When students complete their studies with good grade ,sometimes the universities or colleges offer them employment with high salary packages therefore,it makes them financially stable. To cite an example ,in many foreign countries,some universities give jobs to topper pupils as a teacher in this university after completing their academics. Secondly,in foreign countries,there are lots of new technological amenities available for students that make their study more easier. Likewise,in foreign countries mostly students do their study by making notes or assignments on computers. Finally people come to know about foreign tradition and culture by adopting of other
countries by living there with people as well as they get communicate with different people makes them social.
After describing it umpteen of benefits,it's drawback cannot be fully ignored. Most of students suffer from homesickness after moving foreign and this leads to stressful situation for them.Also,they lead their life under burden of studies as well as work.It is well known fact that the fees of foreign country universities is very high and some students cannot afford these fees because of impoverished then,they take loans for paying these fees which leads to further difficult problem to face in future
To sum up,after describing its merits and demerit,I would like to conclude that the advantage of this situation outweigh its disadvantage
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67286245353 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98374326023 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60594795539 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 139.301786257 49.4020404114 282% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 169.555555556 106.682146367 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8888888889 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5555555556 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150212641781 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687984343436 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610579676792 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0831116148853 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445552184299 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 13.0946893788 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.2 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.