It is difficult for people living in cities today get enough physical exercise. Why is this the case? What can be done to solve the problem?
Nowadays, People who live in urban areas rarely take time to have enough physical exercise. When they arrived home after a hard-working day, they exhausted and lack the energy to practice sports. While this situation will harm people’s health, there are some solutions could help to solve that problem.
People live in urban areas always busy with their agenda so they rarely have time to do fitness. One major factor is a heavy workload, the most industrial and office jobs are physically and mentally demanding. Consequently, they exhausted when arrived home, the only thing they desired is relaxing. The other factor is they take too much time on transportation to go to the company and home. In particular, the road in rush hours always overcrowded so the vehicles must move at a slow speed. On the other hand, Even children may have to face long journeys to school, getting up early and coming back exhausted late in the evening.
Companies and governments should have to act to solve that problem. In business, companies can make life easier at the workplace by flexible working hours or offer job-sharing to their employees. People should have more extra time to relax and do exercises. Besides, governments should create more health campaigns to advertise the benefits of physical exercises. At the same time, they need to build more sports facilities and fitness programs for people to improve their health, as in Vietnam for example, free fitness classes in the park.
In conclusion, if people spend less time working and transporting, they will have the energy to keep fit by using improved facilities in their area.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, if, may, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in particular, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05904059041 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6338282994 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594095940959 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.1425614675 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.4 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143910196872 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050797365926 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536829231696 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0916343693336 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616133849281 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.