It is difficult for people living in cities today get enough physical exercise. Why is this the case? What can be done to solve the problem?
It is true that the residents are living in rural area leaves little time to take regular exercise. There are various reasons behind this issue and the solution should be taken to tackle this problem.
There are two important factors explain why doing exercise is not top priority of inhabitants in city. Firstly, with busy life in city, people must work in high pressure with heavy workload. In other word, they invariably work overtime to get the perfect results and that is necessary to help them can promote in their career path. Therefore, when employment arrive home with the tired body, they tend to lay on the bed and release stress by watching movies or go to sleep. Secondly, because of development of technology, people become over reliance on the smart devices such as TV or mobile phone. In addition, they spend leisure time to play a video game, chatting with their friends or activate in social websites instead of doing exercise. For example, in Vietnam, children come back home after school prefer play video game rather than go to the gym. As a result, the percentage of children get a dangerous disease such as obesity are increasing.
Solutions must be adopted to deal with this trend. Companies should design a room for exercise in the company to enhance physically activities of employments. In addition, bathrooms also should prepare with hot water that create the convenience for people after doing exercise. With that approach, employments will take exercise regularly without hesitation that activities will waste time they spend for working. Besides that, parent should create a plan for themselves and for their children going to the gym or doing exercise together in the fixed time of the day instead of watching Tv or use computer. That measure not only help them and their children reduce the rate of getting disease, but also make them become closer when they spend time to work together.
In conclusion, residents in city are too busy with life and over depend on the technology bring about the ignorance with their health without doing exercise and some measures should be applied to solve this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96935933148 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45062349463 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554317548747 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3376006852 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.941176471 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1176470588 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58823529412 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191179300242 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596077176891 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425140945292 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125304747283 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264092676164 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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