It is duficult for people in the cities to get enough physical exercise. What are the causes and solutions?
People living in the metropolitan areas struggle to get an decent physical activity. In this essay, I will explain several reasons behind this situation and suggest some solutions tothis problem.
On the one hand, there are some explanations to this issue. The foremost reason is that urban dwellers are faced with a lack of fitness centres and playgrounds. More and more lands are ultilized in order to construct roads and infrastructures. Moreover, people nowadays may have to undertake a heavy workload at work. In Viet Nam, for instance, many workers might devote time doing night shift. As a consequence, people cannot have enough time for extracurricular activities, leading toan unhealthy lifestyle.
On the other hand, actions need to be taken so as to solve the outstanding problem. Firstly, goverment should allocate the state budget for building fitness facilities. If there are more yards to play basketball, football people are likely to spend their leisure time engaging in outdoor activities. Secondly, hetic schedules of adults must be eliminated with a view to leading people to a energetic life. As a result, they will have a good overall well-being as they can play sport on a daily basis. For example, many people decreased their risk of obesity, diabetes because their working hours is flexible and sensible.
In conclusion, I am convinced that there are some reasons of this outstanding issue and keys to tackle this situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2094017094 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85032483574 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641025641026 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.5954643278 49.4020404114 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.2666666667 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151762244429 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044489429431 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508384022349 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.08058069405 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505057298303 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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