In this modern era, total youth living on this globe is more than older age group. Thus, it is predicted that this trend is altered in future with availability of large amount of senior citizen than youngsters. If pondered, this largely negative development. My inclination is justified in the ensuing paragraphs.
out all the arguments to put forward my viewpoint, the principle one is that increased number of older people would be burden for the government. Not only vast sums of pension will require for the retired candidates but good medical and residential construction are also their prime requirement from the authorities. Thus, eventually it can be fulfilled by the money of taxpayers and overall budget of authority would be decreased. It can lead to economical problem in affected country because of the hard work of earning members will not proven worthwhile as it went to the service sector instead of education, transportation, well-being and employment area.
Moreover, it may consume a productive time of active members of family. Financial as well as economical support of older parents is social and moral duty of their descendants however majority of youth have started living in nuclear family. Sometimes few people also give up their desires and goals in order to cope-up with lives of their parents. One recent survey carried out by the Health ministry of India have concluded that due to the corona pandemic 76% of Covid-19 patients were from the above 45 age group and their treatment cost arrived from their sons or daughters. Apart from that thousands of youngsters will also spending their golden time with their parents in hospitals.
To conclude, if older to younger ration will disturbed it would be harmful for the balanced society on this globe and proven worthless for the government and growing generation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Out
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Suggestion: economic
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Suggestion: spend
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Suggestion: disturb
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the government and growing generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, while, apart from, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13621262458 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75908770841 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607973421927 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2794140781 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.428571429 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141588907067 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045363201697 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327506360722 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0826148599001 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336320419914 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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