It is generally believed that the internet is an excellent means of communication but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The internet has brought a revolution in information. Every day millions of people worldwide browse the internet pages. Although some of the information it brings might be distorted or misused, the internet has countless of applications that are beneficial like emails and search engines.
Admittedly, some of the material the internet brings are not accurate or confusing. Non-specialized people can add or edit information that otherwise need professionals to handle them. Wikipedia, for example, can be edited or changed by anyone who has an access to the internet. this process of editing by lay people not only brings some errors in the materials published, but it also can lead to distortion of a whole subject, like history or politics. these events,fortunately, are rare and these websites have filters that can distinguish true information from fake news. The other drawback of the internet is misperception. With that I mean readers can misunderstand the content. For example, there are many websites that offer free medical advises. If a patient looking for a remedy for his or her own disease, then its possible for him or her to misunderstand the advice offered and make an erroneous decision based on this website.
On the other hand, the internet has provided researchers with a lot of scientific materials. scientists are able to collect, analyse and publish nowadays more easily than before, thanks to the internet. My professor, for example, has published more than a hundred peer-reviewed article on electronic journals.
Additionally, business people are corresponding more efficiently by the internet. Billions of emails are sent and received on a daily basis and countless number of electronic transactions are being processed electronically. this has brought convenience and prosperity to societies.
In conclusion, while one has to be cognizant and carefull during processing information from the internet, The internet has provided major advantages and wealth to scientists and entrepreneur. Governments should invest on this aspect to bring prosperity to their citizens.
- It is generally believed that the internet is an excellent means of communication but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 89
- Prison is the common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to provide people a better education. Do you agree or disagree? 84
- Many teachers assign homework to students every day. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students?Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 130, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ide browse the internet pages. Although some of the information it brings might be distorte...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ils and search engines. Admittedly, some of the material the internet brings are not ac...
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Line 3, column 253, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'access'.
Suggestion: access
... be edited or changed by anyone who has an access to the internet. this process of editin...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...yone who has an access to the internet. this process of editing by lay people not on...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...hole subject, like history or politics. these events,fortunately, are rare and these ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , fortunately
..., like history or politics. these events,fortunately, are rare and these websites have filte...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Scientists
...ers with a lot of scientific materials. scientists are able to collect, analyse and publis...
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Suggestion: This
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, then, while, as to, for example, i mean, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1787.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51543209877 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24440562908 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574074074074 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.3444190401 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.35 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160174560933 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499239821249 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349249255617 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0852326178318 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412622387682 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.