It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
it is often said that the living purpose of the talented is to be the leadership in one particular field, such as sports or music since their birth despite the fact that some ordinary can become the extraordinary by the rigorous training. this essay will debate both views and express my opinion.
it is undeniable that normal example is possible to be the champion as long as they pay an extremely effort on the daily training as well as the continuous determination of changing themselves. For instance, my brother was an obese when he was young since the lack of exercises and the unbalanced eating habits. Recently, he decided to lose weight as he knew that obesity will obstruct his future or even his life, so he started to limit his food as well as participated a fitting team to jog with fellow every day. And the change is obvious now, the high weight and the fat body are lost by the painful effort. Therefore, even though the innate talent is insufficient, people is able to narrow the distance with talented as long as they are willing to pay their time.
Though we may improve myself via the rigorous ways, the distance between ordinary and gifted is still existing. some gifted person is chosen to join on a special field. Yao Ming, the rarely person who is higher than two meters in China, is the best example to prove the talented since his born as the innate superior lets him to be a basketball athlete in America as well as became the valuable athlete over the world despite his effort on this field is one of the key factors. Whereas, the dream of being a professional athlete cannot be achieved in many youngers as the inborn height restricts the prospect of them. Thus, the distance between ordinary and extraordinary is not easily to overcome according to the arduous heart.
In conclusion, while the inferior can be improved by different effective methods, it is true that the certain talents are born to be the leader on the specific field.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, well, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66379310345 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53033354686 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557471264368 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.293134303 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.846153846 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7692307692 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132463525797 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041841035366 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441603352325 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0876339939504 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320041876302 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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