It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to be good in any direction.
Let’s start by discussing about gifted children, they begin showing their talants from an unconscious and un early age. There is a differences between ungifted children and children who born with certain talents. I mean their interests are not similar. For instance children who born with a talent to sing or dance they are from an early age have an interest in music and also they are closer to creativity while their peers are just think about toys and about playing outside. Likewise, there are some people who thinks that everybody can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. I completely agree with it. Because there is a proverb “An oak is not felled at one stroke” If someone works hard he will achieve great success. All things considered. I think that both of sides have a place to be.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 126, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'There are a differences'?
Suggestion: There are a differences
...s from an unconscious and un early age. There is a differences between ungifted children and children ...
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Line 2, column 135, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a difference' or simply 'differences'?
Suggestion: a difference; differences
... unconscious and un early age. There is a differences between ungifted children and children ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, likewise, so, while, for instance, i mean, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 836.0 1615.20841683 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 176.0 315.596192385 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48736476438 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642045454545 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 506.74238477 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.7319440427 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373292384082 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129430235255 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146834990302 0.0667982634062 220% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.377802235607 0.151304729494 250% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.179797978295 0.056905535591 316% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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