It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for sports or music and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become sports person or musician.
Discuss both of these views and give your opinion.
The world is filled with Talented and non talented people, which could be in sports or music, however most people are full of the opinion that to be a good entertainer, you need to be taught. While others believe that being a fabulous athlete or musician is a gift. These two opinions would be looked into and a conclusion would be drawn stating my opinion on the matter in the subsequent paragraphs.
In Sports and Music Most people are of the opinion that talent is one of the first criteria to be successful in the industry, for instance, reminiscing on the late and renowned musician
Micheal Jackson, who was talented and won many laurels for himself, was gifted, same can be said of Lionel Messi, who is also very much gifted in sports, without this gifts, they wouldn't have attained such heights in the industry
In Contrast, as much as some individuals are born with talents, there are many others who are not gifted, but thriving well in the industry, examples of such people are echristiano Ronaldo and Whitney Houston, who went through rigourous trainings to be the best in their perspective fields. thus this shows that talent can be learned.
In Conclusion, Talents is gotten from Birth and can be learnt, but in other to be successful in the Field, Hard work, Determination and Success are both needed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1105.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82532751092 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54114705361 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589519650655 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 227.185496896 49.4020404114 460% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 184.166666667 106.682146367 173% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.1666666667 20.7667163134 184% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.6666666667 7.06120827912 236% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240871441048 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120198278076 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437016278681 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130668850881 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519889072629 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 13.0946893788 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.83 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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