The maps represents the notifications that took place at resorts on the coast line during the 15 year period from 1990 to 2005.
In 1990, there was a large residential area with higher number of dwellings houses, but the resert experienced major alterations. By 2005, individual houses located beside the river has been demolished and replaced by specious supermarket and new apartment blocks. Furthermore, the woodland in the south-east of the town was cleared along with a couple of terraced houses to make way for a new stretch of railways. Moreover, a factory has been built over this period.
Numerous trees were cut down and only few of them remained near by the lake. Another significant development was the election of the airport north of the river. A ferry has been constructed in the southern corner of Templeton by 2005. In addition, the massive house on the shore of the lake was knocked down. A large number of small dwellings were raised near the hospital. south of the lake.
Overall, the seaside resort witnessed an alteration from mainly the residential area to industrial district.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
... cut down and only few of them remained near by the lake. Another significant developme...
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Line 5, column 310, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
...the shore of the lake was knocked down. A large number of small dwellings were raised near the ho...
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Line 5, column 375, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: South
...wellings were raised near the hospital. south of the lake. Overall, the seaside re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02717391304 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75121879677 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641304347826 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.285963251 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0833333333 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141990599668 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439351121176 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730398943937 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102651180177 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.089123413861 0.0819641961636 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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