It has become easier and more affordable for people to travel to other countries. Do you think it is positive or a negative development? Give your opinion and relevant example from your experience.
Travelling unplugs the person from pushes and poles of daily life. People find UN challenging and economical to move abroad. In my opinion it is very beneficial for the country and discussing the contributing factors in the upcoming paragraph
Commenting with, moving foreign countries allows the exchanging of culture languages and traditions among various nation. To be more specific, this analysis the understanding and respect of people which belongs to other religions and follow contrasting rituals. This can be clearly seen by organisation named international society for Krishna consciousness whose founder went United States of America in 1960s to propagate Indian philosophy as a result there are thousand of devotees of lord Krishna in American nowadays.
Besides this another major dominating factor is people can get work experience from different international companies. This leads to get better job opportunities in their native as well as other countries. Moreover, it gives by the choice to students to avail there higher education from finest universities of the world. For instance, ministry of education, India records the highest number of students in 2021 to 2022 who moves overseas for further learning.
To encapsulate, according to me travelling beyond national boundaries of country gave the small exposure and changes once perception towards the world. Therefore government should inspire populance to do this, for their holistic growth and development.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 402, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'in the 1960s'.
Suggestion: in the 1960s
...e founder went United States of America in 1960s to propagate Indian philosophy as a res...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 464, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...Indian philosophy as a result there are thousand of devotees of lord Krishna in American...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 284, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'from the finest'.
Suggestion: from the finest
...tudents to avail there higher education from finest universities of the world. For instance...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 153, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...nges once perception towards the world. Therefore government should inspire populance to ...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, as for, for instance, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65625 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99078823286 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.691964285714 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9737347725 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.181818182 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3636363636 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.90909090909 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177093767198 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059634675671 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.022223856864 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0998194737617 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258555620149 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.55 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 402, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'in the 1960s'.
Suggestion: in the 1960s
...e founder went United States of America in 1960s to propagate Indian philosophy as a res...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 464, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...Indian philosophy as a result there are thousand of devotees of lord Krishna in American...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 284, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'from the finest'.
Suggestion: from the finest
...tudents to avail there higher education from finest universities of the world. For instance...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 153, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...nges once perception towards the world. Therefore government should inspire populance to ...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, as for, for instance, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65625 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99078823286 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.691964285714 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9737347725 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.181818182 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3636363636 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.90909090909 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177093767198 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059634675671 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.022223856864 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0998194737617 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258555620149 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.55 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.