It has become more easier and more affordable for people to travel to other countries. Is this a positive or negative development ?
Nowadyas, it is undeniable fact that the people are travelling more and more from one place to another due to availability of nummerable traveling resources. So, it is asserted by some individuals as a constructive change, while others assumed is as a negative change. I am in favour of former notion and this essay will shed light on my views in subsequent pragraphs.
Masses can acquire knowledge about various kind of cultures and traditions in the world by travelling to other regions. To elaborate it, travelling offers to people to explore the world about different type of individuals and not only their rituals, but also their living styles. So, if masses would travel to other nations, then they will learn about other traditions and habituals. Besides this, they can also learn about more languanges and they can taste various kind of cuisines by travelling to another nations. Hence, travelling can allow to people to know about different cultures as well as they can taste their food.
Moreover, despite of this, traveling would assist to countries to increase their economy. To explicate, if foreingners would visit to another regions, then they will help to surge their economy growth because whenever they traveling to other countries, then they always have to spend money to purchase food, accommodation and so on. Therefore, their spending can contribute to rise economy level of that country. To epitome, Dubai is a rich country because its economy mostly depend on tourism industry.
To conclude, I believe this is definately a positive development because individuals can get knowledge about other cultures along with their traditions. Besides this, so many nations can increase thier economy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 547, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'peopling'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: peopling
...er nations. Hence, travelling can allow to people to know about different cultures as wel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, while, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24275362319 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74524612494 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547101449275 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2657212935 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.357142857 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236096193932 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849528030554 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599504851141 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149623756434 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539438333944 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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