it is important for all towns and cities to have large public outdoor places like parks and squares to what extent do you agree or disagree
In this present era, the development of the urban areas is in peak position. And, it is valuable for all towns and cities to have huge public outdoor places such as parks, in which people can spend their free time. This essay will explain why it is mandatory to have public parks and also give its benefits. That described in the following paragraphs.
To embarks with, there are plenty of reasons for constructed outdoor places in the metropolitan. To begin with, people who live in the cities are extremely busy with their work, therefore they feel stressful. And, gardens or parks help them to reduce their stress and forget about work-related problems, which will enhance their creativity. For example, 70% of creative persons are spending their time in some places, which help to decline their mental pain. That was written in a survey of the University of Gujarat.
On the same hand, that facility has some pros, which will improve the country's value. Firstly, if the government build any public parks for local citizens, then those places attract children. They went there for playing different games and develop their skills in particular sports. They will definitely make the nation proud in the future. Secondly, those places also be tourist place, which will provide more income to nearby businesses like hotels, shops, and many more. For instance, France constructed numerous outdoor facilities and a numbers of tourist visit those places. That place became richer as compared to the past.
To conclude, those places have return rule for the country and civilian development. I strongly believe that cities or towns must-have outdoor places.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in particular, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13653136531 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.424272803 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616236162362 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0768895784 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.3333333333 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0555555556 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237883482554 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717750630039 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736779449542 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165502413102 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621198418256 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.94 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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